Undying Love - Authentic Love

Hello dear readers,

I'm now writing the last chapter of Undying love - Authentic love.

My two characters, Chung and Madailéin will have a new adventure, I'm writing it in this time. I think their next story will surprise many, but I shall say no more. :-D

Since my two characters have attracted 5000 readers, I do not see the interest to abandon.

I want to thank all my readers who take the time to read my stories, I am delighted and very happy that my two lovers please you.

I hope their adventure will continue to grow and develop with you!

On that note, I wish you a great month of April ...

Karole McDowell, author.

April 2011

Undying Love, the authentic love... Chapter XXXII

The authentic love

XXXII

Chung, who had now returned at home, saw Madailéin in the kitchen. He walked toward her on tiptoe. He put his hands on her hips and she turned to kiss him.

She looked surprised. He went to the bathroom.

- It's your birthday, Chung! Madailéin shouted.

He opened the door of the bathroom and looked at her, smiling. Madailéin approached him, opened her arms and she pressed him against her. He had a painful face.

- You okay? Madailéin said.

- Yes, I think I drank too much, I will feel better just now, "said Chung by closing the door of the bathroom.

She found this curious reply, she knew when he was drunk, and there he did not have his usual tics.

She went into the living room.

- Chung is not going well, "said Madailéin to Sami.

He looked at her strangely. He seemed uncomfortable.

Later, Madailéin joined him very uneasy, because there was too long. She did not know if she must to enter or wait until he comes out.

She opened the door and threw a quick glance. He had his left hand resting on the sink and held his head on the other hand.

- Are you okay? Madailéin said in a voice concern.

- I do not know.

He sat on the toilet seat. He was pale as a sheet.

- You're sweating! Do you want I call a doctor?

- No, it is not necessary, it will go.

At this time, Chung is fell down on the floor.

- Chung! Sami, come! Madailéin shouted.

Sami ran at full speed, by hearing the cry of Madailéin. She was in the bathroom and Chung lying on the ground. He detached his shirt and shouted to call an ambulance.

- Calm down! We'll take him to the hospital, ok?

- No, I'm not okay. What he has? Madailéin asked panicked.

She squatted down and saw blood coming of the abdomen of Chung.

- Oh Lord! What's all this blood. What has he got? What did you do?

- Do not worry, he is strong and it will be on foot within a few days.

He tried to console her with little success.

- What happened? Madailéin asked.

- We were playing pool, and when we left, we heard a gunshot and it's Chung (...)

- Why you did not bring him to the hospital!

Sami called the ambulance.

She squatted beside his body, badly injured by a final attack of the enemy who had fled. She hardly heard his heart beating. Grief and rage overwhelmed her. Under her eyes, she was losing her love.

Paramedics arrived a few minutes later. Madailéin, saw the paramedics him put the oxygen mask. He was still unconscious when they laid him on the stretcher. Sami took Madailéin in his arms and told her she could not go with him in her condition. He had called Saki who went to the hospital to wait for him.

Her legs were shaking so much, she fell on the ground when the ambulance went away. Sami did not know what to say to comfort her.

Sami was installed on the sofa. He looked up and saw her on the doorstep.

- Sami, go home, said Madailéin.

- I think I'll stay for the night. I fear you to do something stupid, kind of walking the streets to find out who shot him. And the one who shot Chung is not a beginner.

- ...

She leaned her head against the wall and let herself slid onto the floor. Sami got up and joined her, taking her hand.

- Do not worry, he will pull through. Do you think he will abandon his Madailéin!

- I do not know what I would do if I lost him!

- Stop saying silly things. Saki is with him. Promise me you will not do anything stupid, said Sami.

- I can not promise you that.

- Hum! Your mother called, she arrives in Toronto tomorrow afternoon.

- What is she doing here?

- See her daughter, he said, smiling.

She did not answer. She was content to look at him.

To be continued...

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Author's note...

Hello or good evening everyone!

If one were to describe myself in few words it would be: Mini-Wheat or as some say : weird.

I wrote my first novel at 14, a horror story for adults, Les Forces du Mal or Evil.

My purpose is to shock or at least make it uncomfortable. Whether in horror or in another register. In my own style to me. Stories short, long and effective. I think to continue writing for much of my life.

My stories contain material very hard and are intended to shock the reader, but I'd say it's more a psychological or even a denunciation of violence, to show the dark side of humanity which often acts without thinking suffer the consequences.

Personally, I get comments, make this more privately. Why? I donot know.

If there is one thing I hate is people who just read the story, which contains 1500 words, but they stop only on a single word.Or they read the story in search of a word that might offend orthey have absolutely no understanding what they read.

About this blog: I think people are more easier to write negative than the positive, if I talk about messages I receive. There is even a person who has never read the story, but she was only stopped on the title by writing this message: Eternal love, does not exist.

Chung and Madailéin, are twin souls ... cosmic universal love.

Regarding "Eternal Love" and "Eternal Love, the authentic love." These two stories are published on this blog in French and English ... but I'll make a small clarification on the English version. I do not have time to write in French and English, so I write it first in French and I am using a translator to translate it, once translated, I reread it and I bring some corrections, because in general, with translation software, translation is not very credible, and really rotten.

And if I always talk about these two stories, I've never written a love story, 1 - I'm not The Sleeping Beauty. 2 - I'm more of Mickey and Mallory side than on the side of Romeo and Juliet. This is my first, if you could read my other stories! Hum! I'll post maybe ... :-D Let's talk about characters, "Chung" was originally Chinese, not Japanese. But I have been so many negative messages, he is has become Japanese, and even then, I have some negative comments. But in my head, "Chung"is not Japanese but Chinese. And I always write according to ... the other characters, Madailéin and Saraid are Irish, but the others are Chinese and not Japanese. So much for accuracy.

Well, let's talk, the side more "eroticism" stories. I don't like the details too pronounced. We can describe the act without necessarily going into details.

In the beginning ... I described their relationship in a sober manner, without being chaste in the extreme. But without reading what was happening, we could know what they did. But I lost readers because it was not enough detailed and the other side, I lost readers because it was become too detailed. We can not appeal to everyone ...

Okay, so ... as I am a headstrong, signed and approved, I'll make some corrections and restore order in my stories ... and thus write this story as It was originally, and as It had to stay ...

The origins of the male characters will are such that they should be, and as the more intimate side will be just touched upon ... In this way my stories will be more believable and I will feel more comfortable.

Okay, well I think I have said everything ... and I wish you good day and thank you to those who have read to the end.

Karole McDowell...